Rawlings begins to describe the boy’s actions as be prepared to sleep on the forest floor. Before he falls asleep, she writes, “There was an instant when the boy hung at the edge of a high bank made of the soft fluff of broom sage, and the rain frog and the starry dripping of the flutter-mill hung with him.” This sentence is lengthy and complex with more things happening in it at once. The boy is about to fall asleep, but he is still awake, which is why she uses the words hung as well. He is between sleep and rest, partially awake. He is still noticing things, such as the rain frog and flutter-mill. She then uses the same syntax technique to narrate the boy into the final stages of sleep. When he is finally asleep, Rawlings contrasts her intricate syntax for a more simple construction, which reads, “He slept.” When he is asleep, there is nothing elaborate to write about. That long explanation mentioned before that took long sentences to clarify mimic the actions of the person she is writing about. While he is sleeping, he is not doing anything, so the sentence is short and to the point. Her use of this skill makes the writing have a mood, tone, and invokes interest in the readers, which is why syntax is a major component as to why Rawlings won the Pulitzer Prize for her
Rawlings begins to describe the boy’s actions as be prepared to sleep on the forest floor. Before he falls asleep, she writes, “There was an instant when the boy hung at the edge of a high bank made of the soft fluff of broom sage, and the rain frog and the starry dripping of the flutter-mill hung with him.” This sentence is lengthy and complex with more things happening in it at once. The boy is about to fall asleep, but he is still awake, which is why she uses the words hung as well. He is between sleep and rest, partially awake. He is still noticing things, such as the rain frog and flutter-mill. She then uses the same syntax technique to narrate the boy into the final stages of sleep. When he is finally asleep, Rawlings contrasts her intricate syntax for a more simple construction, which reads, “He slept.” When he is asleep, there is nothing elaborate to write about. That long explanation mentioned before that took long sentences to clarify mimic the actions of the person she is writing about. While he is sleeping, he is not doing anything, so the sentence is short and to the point. Her use of this skill makes the writing have a mood, tone, and invokes interest in the readers, which is why syntax is a major component as to why Rawlings won the Pulitzer Prize for her