At the beginning of my journey I did not outline my work which equated to having no effective plan for my paper. I simply began to type which created disjointed leaps from one thought to another. In my first paper I did not plan transitions because I had no set direction for my work. For example, I concluded a paragraph with: “I …show more content…
In my paper I would write out my thoughts in a continuous flow instead of writing clearly for a reader’s comprehension. Because I wrote the sentence, I had a difficult time understanding how another person would be confused by what I was trying to explain. In a reflective state I am now able to see how sentences, like “the argument that prostitution is sex without reproduction while surrogacy is reproduction without sex is denounced when Purdy states that surrogacy is a choice in which the surrogate is allowed to decide all of logistics of the process before going through with the process” can be incredibly hard to follow (1 Surrogacy Draft). A course goal was to be able to “express yourself verbally and converse thoughtfully about complex ideas”. I accomplished this by taking the advice given by my instructor to slow down and break my rambles into multiple