Instead of abandoning the theme of a journey, however, Wilbur continues it in the stanzas six to the end of the poem. Instead of dropping the imagery, the author seems to increase his use of imagery inducing words. For example, “sleek, wild, dark/ and iridescent” (lines 21-22) all conjure up a slippery creature that is magical but with a frightening undertone to it at the same time. Personification is the most important in the whole poem because it is the device that conveys the message the most and is used the most throughout the whole poem. Mr. Wilbur personifies his daughter’s journey of writing, making mistakes, figuring out what works and what doesn’t to a boat ride and then to a bird. When I imagine a boat ride I imagine the ocean waves rocking me back and forth, a slight imbalance when I walk and a slight fear of a storm and of
Instead of abandoning the theme of a journey, however, Wilbur continues it in the stanzas six to the end of the poem. Instead of dropping the imagery, the author seems to increase his use of imagery inducing words. For example, “sleek, wild, dark/ and iridescent” (lines 21-22) all conjure up a slippery creature that is magical but with a frightening undertone to it at the same time. Personification is the most important in the whole poem because it is the device that conveys the message the most and is used the most throughout the whole poem. Mr. Wilbur personifies his daughter’s journey of writing, making mistakes, figuring out what works and what doesn’t to a boat ride and then to a bird. When I imagine a boat ride I imagine the ocean waves rocking me back and forth, a slight imbalance when I walk and a slight fear of a storm and of