One reason is that practically the whole book was her having visions. I felt like they told me what happened each day rather than the whole book based off of six months. So you are basically reading about a book that tells everything what happened from beginning to end. The other for sure uses detail when it comes to describing the characters. For example, “... seven years old, brown hair,brown eyes, wearing jeans and a yellow shirt…” Another example, “The sandy-haired policeman with the vivid blue eyes,...” When the author uses this type of description, I can visualize what the character looks like. The plot of the story moves very fast. The first sentence of the whole book is, “Bobby Zenner disappeared...” In the first sentence it already told me that Bobby was gone. The author has absolutely amazing imagery all throughout the book. For example, “He had been frightened, terribly frightened; the intensity of his terror had left a lingering residue like the stale odor of cigarette smoke in an empty room.” In my head I can smell the awful smell of cigarette some. Another example would be, “Then, abruptly , the atmosphere was shattered by the crash of a screen door and a volley of wild barking. A small black and white terrier burst out of the house and a came hurling across the the yard to throw itself full force against the side of the car.” In my mind I can picture the terroir come running out of the house. The
One reason is that practically the whole book was her having visions. I felt like they told me what happened each day rather than the whole book based off of six months. So you are basically reading about a book that tells everything what happened from beginning to end. The other for sure uses detail when it comes to describing the characters. For example, “... seven years old, brown hair,brown eyes, wearing jeans and a yellow shirt…” Another example, “The sandy-haired policeman with the vivid blue eyes,...” When the author uses this type of description, I can visualize what the character looks like. The plot of the story moves very fast. The first sentence of the whole book is, “Bobby Zenner disappeared...” In the first sentence it already told me that Bobby was gone. The author has absolutely amazing imagery all throughout the book. For example, “He had been frightened, terribly frightened; the intensity of his terror had left a lingering residue like the stale odor of cigarette smoke in an empty room.” In my head I can smell the awful smell of cigarette some. Another example would be, “Then, abruptly , the atmosphere was shattered by the crash of a screen door and a volley of wild barking. A small black and white terrier burst out of the house and a came hurling across the the yard to throw itself full force against the side of the car.” In my mind I can picture the terroir come running out of the house. The