The Story Who I Am Without Him By Sharon Flake

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In the story “who I am without him”? By Sharon flake, the narrator gave me an example on how Sharon flakes put the main idea of how she felt on the girl loving the boy. I say she really wanted him to love her but he didn’t really care about her. She was mainly wanted him because he cool, popular, and handsome. She was popular to but need a boyfriend; I say that she cared a lot about him. What I felt in the story was she was heartbroken for him; like I wouldn’t care to be honest.
So this is how the beginning started getting to its place of her loving him. “But I’m not going, I got things to do. “She said. The relationship they had didn’t really have a loving kind of relationship. It mostly had an awkward relationship. He didn’t really pay attention

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