The Snorpians Alternate Ending

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Gertrude had been surprised by the three snorpians and she had surprised them as well. One of them fired his stunner at her and she dropped like a rock. She was unable to move, but she could hear the snorpians talking in whispers in their own strange language. One of them scooped her up in his arms and carried her a good hundred yards from the snorpian base. She was laid roughly on the ground and she felt a jab in her arm, shortly after that, she was able to sit up.
“We stunned you for nothing,” said one of the snorpians, “I see you are already one of ours.”
Estua had given her a fake bite mark, along with the rest of their party, before they infiltrated the snorpian base, Gertrude was glad now, that Brock had insisted upon it.
“It looks like
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As the snorpian staggered backward, Brock continued on, he pulled Gertrude's sword from the dead snorpian and blocked the next thrust of his stolen sword. Brock countered with a blow that cut deep into the snorpian's backward knee.
“Can't have you running off now can we?” Brock said coolly.
The snorpian managed to stay on his feet and thrust his sword at Brock's midsection. Brock danced nimbly aside and brought his own sword down on the snorpians forearm, cutting off the end of its arm. The snorpian turned to run and Brock sliced into its uninjured leg, this time it went down. Brock cut off its penis next, as the snorpian screamed in agony, he skewered the severed member on the end of his sword and flung it away. Then he stuck the tip of his sword into the snorpian's gut and twisted, the snorpian's screams intensified.
Gertrude heard more riders and Josie's anguished voice said, “Brock stop, we need one alive.”
Brock looked at her and pulled the sword out, his eyes moved to helpless Gertrude on the ground, stripped of her clothing, he could see her tears glistening in the light of the big moon. Brock howled in anger and rammed the sword into the snorpian's neck. The point stuck in the ground and the hilt quivered as he moved to Gertrude, he knelt down beside her and cradled her head in his

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