Analysis Outline Name:Kaitlyn Fultz
Intro(ideas)Thesis:The Sneetches By Dr.Seuss is a story about a particular creatures that go by the name ¨The Sneetches.¨ Some of the Sneetches have stars on their bellies while others do not. Sneetches with the stars on their bellies are considered to be better than the other group of Sneetches which do not have stars on their bellies. Leading me to think that the Sneetches with stars are referring to humans who think they are above others just because of the clothes, shoes, gaming devices etcetera that they have.
Paragraph One
Topic:The star belly Sneetches think they are superior to the other Sneetches only because of the star on their bellies.
Intro to Support:For example in the story when the Star Bellied Sneetches would glout in front of the Sneetches without the stars by pushing their belly out loud and proud in order to rub it in their face that they had a star upon their tummy. …show more content…
Paragraph Wrap-up/Transition:Sneetches without the star felt so left out that they would go at any extent to be as ¨cool¨ as the Star Belly Sneetches.
Paragraph Two
Topic:Wanting the star upon their belly so bad that Sylvester Mcbeans created a product called the ¨McBeans Star-on Machine.¨
Intro to Support:One after another even two at a time the Sneetches went into the machine on one end and comes out the other with a star on themselves.
Connector from Support to Thesis:This is just like how in real life how people will go out of their way to buy ¨the next best thing.¨
Paragraph Wrap-up/Transition:After all the work they went through to get the star on their tummy the original Star Belly Sneetches are off to bigger and ¨better¨
Intro(ideas)Thesis:The Sneetches By Dr.Seuss is a story about a particular creatures that go by the name ¨The Sneetches.¨ Some of the Sneetches have stars on their bellies while others do not. Sneetches with the stars on their bellies are considered to be better than the other group of Sneetches which do not have stars on their bellies. Leading me to think that the Sneetches with stars are referring to humans who think they are above others just because of the clothes, shoes, gaming devices etcetera that they have.
Paragraph One
Topic:The star belly Sneetches think they are superior to the other Sneetches only because of the star on their bellies.
Intro to Support:For example in the story when the Star Bellied Sneetches would glout in front of the Sneetches without the stars by pushing their belly out loud and proud in order to rub it in their face that they had a star upon their tummy. …show more content…
Paragraph Wrap-up/Transition:Sneetches without the star felt so left out that they would go at any extent to be as ¨cool¨ as the Star Belly Sneetches.
Paragraph Two
Topic:Wanting the star upon their belly so bad that Sylvester Mcbeans created a product called the ¨McBeans Star-on Machine.¨
Intro to Support:One after another even two at a time the Sneetches went into the machine on one end and comes out the other with a star on themselves.
Connector from Support to Thesis:This is just like how in real life how people will go out of their way to buy ¨the next best thing.¨
Paragraph Wrap-up/Transition:After all the work they went through to get the star on their tummy the original Star Belly Sneetches are off to bigger and ¨better¨