The Shallows Reading Response

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Reading Response 1 The prologue and first chapter of The Shallows bring up many good points about how the human mind is processing information in relation to the always-evolving Internet. A big strength I saw in the chapter was I felt like I could relate to the author’s experiences with Internet use. I used to be able to read books for hours without ever stopping, and now I struggle reading ten pages. In fact, I caught myself doing so as I was reading the chapters. While I found The Shallows incredibly interesting, I could not stop myself from pausing and checking my phone. I have never really understood why I have such a hard time focusing on reading, but it makes complete sense that it’s because we need constant information being loaded

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