The writer of the paper I peer edited was Wilson Lee. The topic he was arguing over was bodybuilding and steroid use. He states that today people use steroids in bodybuilding today and it is ruining the sport, causing death, and giving the builders bad temptations He was against the use of steroids as it harms the human body and removes the competition of bodybuilding. He states that steroids have landed the bodybuilding profession into infamy due to steroids and drugs. The thesis statement is somewhat clear but needs to be elaborated upon. I had to go back and find it to remember it and did not see it again in the conclusion. I found the source about the damage to the body most compelling. This was ruined however by the fact that it did
