The National Anthem: A Summary-Response Essay

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After each paper I write, I notice the progress I have made with my writing. I am able to continue improving on many aspects of my writing, but each time I finish an essay, I realize how much more efficient the process has become for me. In this analysis, I will explain my assertions and assess the things I have done well, along with the aspects I can continue to improve on for the next time.
The National Anthem is a very powerful song, and like many other Americans, I have heard it being played before sporting events on television and at my school for my entire life. The dominant idea of my summary-response essay is that the National Anthem is a timeless patriotic piece that will continue to bring Americans together for many generations to

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