You’re gonna really get fat if you eat at fast food restaurants all the time.
If you eat at fast food restaurants all the time you’re gonna really get fat.
The end result of completely eliminating the floodwall was utter devastation
Completely eliminating of the floodwall was the end result of utter devastation.
The referendum was held by the government in the month of August.
In the month of August the referendum was held by the government.
The-anti-gunners are constantly lobbying Congress, whining about people killing Bambi. I believe the writer is conveying a message to the reader that guns are okay, so quit being a baby about guns. The word whining describes the writer’s attitude towards guns.
How would you revise
If you eat at fast food restaurants all the time you’re gonna really get fat.
The end result of completely eliminating the floodwall was utter devastation
Completely eliminating of the floodwall was the end result of utter devastation.
The referendum was held by the government in the month of August.
In the month of August the referendum was held by the government.
The-anti-gunners are constantly lobbying Congress, whining about people killing Bambi. I believe the writer is conveying a message to the reader that guns are okay, so quit being a baby about guns. The word whining describes the writer’s attitude towards guns.
How would you revise