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Revision is my most favorite part of all, since it changes and also differentiates a good and bad writing piece. The revision does not only simply mean to correct the wrong usage of grammar, but also use improve the writing as a whole when dissecting it into several tiny parts. Those revisions might be a retouch of a sentence, an expansion of ideas, or an omission of an unnecessary details. There are just so many things that can be done to one writing that would possibly transform an ugly and incomplete first draft into a great and beautiful final writing. In fact, I view the revision process as the last step of the makeup process, putting on the matte power. Without this last step, no matter how good the makeup is, it can easily be washed away with the unavoidable dirt and oils. Similar concept applies to writing, a writing idea or thought can be extremely exceptional yet with the lack of revision, it is not any different from a ruined makeup