In the beginning of the semester I was very unsure on how I would appeal in writing, I’ve always been very cynical of my writing because I never thought it was good enough for a college standard. Insanely nervous about entering with writing, it was not as terrifying as I sought it to be. The writing was very straight forward- choose a topic and to stay relative to that topic throughout the semester. Since the topic I chose was very dear to me and I actually did have passionate it about, it made it much easier for me to form bond around it. Like stated before, I took on challenges to test myself to even more extents by using styles that I weren’t so confident on using before. One of those styles were using the end the paper how it started. In
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The audience allows me to think more about what I am going to write and to take consideration in the work I write. Like when working on the community I need to consider my audience not just from the United States perspective, but instead I needed to understand the perspective to successfully connect to that global audience. The purpose helps me find a comfortable direction to follow when addressing the audience and getting them on board to my proposal. My purpose also gives a reason to the audience to want to pay attention to what I may want to pitch. When asking for donations to fund more projects, I need to address the audience that has money and address the audience that doesn’t have much money but find an even ground for them to both find a way to donate for the greater good. I personally paid attention to not asking for certain amounts but giving rewards for milestones that were hit. Allowing both groups to donate anything but the group with the most benefits from both to help reach the milestones quicker, and pushing them to continue to donate since when people experience accomplishments, most likely those people will continue to push to receive that ultimate …show more content…
There is much more that I need to focus on because I’m not very strong in that way yet. Run-on sentences is one thing I still need to some serious work on, although, I understand what a run-on is and can easily distinguish one. For an example, the first paper I wrote, I was marked down for three run on sentences in my paper. The run-on sentences were very easy fixes. Getting around to my third paper, there were no marked down run-on’s in my paper. However, the other papers did get marked down with run-ons because admittingly I didn’t pay as much attention to my work, which leads me to other weaknesses. Paying more intensive attention to my work, although this is not a writing weakness. Paying attention to my work and catching mistakes is an overall weakness as well as planning my writing out accordingly. To be very blunt, my writing could have shown growth in many ways if I just sat down and took a little more time to write and revise than the usual. I think one strength I can easy the most I’m proud of is constantly interpreting my creativity into my work. Throughout this semester I was given the option to choose my own social issue that I was passionate about, and in general being someone who loves to express things that I am passionate about. It wasn’t as hard as I thought it out to be. The papers were relatively easy to focus in
The audience allows me to think more about what I am going to write and to take consideration in the work I write. Like when working on the community I need to consider my audience not just from the United States perspective, but instead I needed to understand the perspective to successfully connect to that global audience. The purpose helps me find a comfortable direction to follow when addressing the audience and getting them on board to my proposal. My purpose also gives a reason to the audience to want to pay attention to what I may want to pitch. When asking for donations to fund more projects, I need to address the audience that has money and address the audience that doesn’t have much money but find an even ground for them to both find a way to donate for the greater good. I personally paid attention to not asking for certain amounts but giving rewards for milestones that were hit. Allowing both groups to donate anything but the group with the most benefits from both to help reach the milestones quicker, and pushing them to continue to donate since when people experience accomplishments, most likely those people will continue to push to receive that ultimate …show more content…
There is much more that I need to focus on because I’m not very strong in that way yet. Run-on sentences is one thing I still need to some serious work on, although, I understand what a run-on is and can easily distinguish one. For an example, the first paper I wrote, I was marked down for three run on sentences in my paper. The run-on sentences were very easy fixes. Getting around to my third paper, there were no marked down run-on’s in my paper. However, the other papers did get marked down with run-ons because admittingly I didn’t pay as much attention to my work, which leads me to other weaknesses. Paying more intensive attention to my work, although this is not a writing weakness. Paying attention to my work and catching mistakes is an overall weakness as well as planning my writing out accordingly. To be very blunt, my writing could have shown growth in many ways if I just sat down and took a little more time to write and revise than the usual. I think one strength I can easy the most I’m proud of is constantly interpreting my creativity into my work. Throughout this semester I was given the option to choose my own social issue that I was passionate about, and in general being someone who loves to express things that I am passionate about. It wasn’t as hard as I thought it out to be. The papers were relatively easy to focus in