Creative Writing: The Mongols

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Long ago, during the period of the fourteenth century, an empire emerged within Northeast Asia. The empire was known as: the Mongol Empire. The Mongol Empire had created the world’s largest empire, and they were set out to dominate the entire world. However, the world was oblivious to the fact that those Mongols were far more different compared to themselves. They were ghosts. Poltergeists, to be distinctly specific. It’s much too late now to stop them. Like every other unknown creature and presence there were, they all had one primary ambition: to have complete domination over the entire universe!
The Mongols were determined to obtain that goal. All through the help of their precious leader, Genghis Khan. Settling down in a vast, intricately
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“Is that a challenge, Queen Sora?” He stepped forward and grinned maliciously. “What would you do if I told you that it was?” Without waiting for his reply, she glared. Her fangs shot out, and her eyes transformed from a chocolate brown, to a bloody red hue. A loud thunder rumbled far off from the direction Queen Sora had appeared from. “It’s to my utmost sincerity that I keep everything in control, Genghis. You’ve made me disappointed.” Queen Sora had swiftly crept up behind him, with a nail gently tracing along his neck. Before he knew it, a multitude of vampires were surrounding him and his men. “Very well, you have left me with no choice. Such a shame for a beauty like you to die.” Before she could react, he pulled out a silver dagger and staked Queen Sora’s heart with it. He screeched a high pitch scream that frightened all of the tiny creatures away. “Dump the holy water above your heads AT ONCE!!!” The splashing of water immediately occurred, after Genghis Khan’s order. All of the remaining vampires hissed in fury and flew off, as their queen’s body began to …show more content…
“Sir,” a young lad had brought his horse beside Genghis’. “What is it young one?” He replied. “What exactly are we going to do to take over the entire world?” Genghis smiled softly, and patted the lad’s head. “We shall infiltrate each and every major city until each is under our wing, and work our way up until everything is in our possessions.” The young boy blinked and pondered for a few minutes. “Is that…I mean…will that really be possible? Do we have what it takes to do that?” The inquiry struck Genghis deep, deep down to the bottom of the pit. Did this child dare question my authority and utter strength? “Why of course we do. Now, run along elsewhere.” Genghis sneered. The child rode away on his

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