Introduction
(AGG) Najmah had encountered various dangerous threats to her life, but she managed to fight through it to become a fearless machine that’s only purpose was to save her family from falling.(BS-1) Najmah had to become a amazing leader in order to survive.(BS-2)In relation to this Najmah manages to “lose” her ability to fear something or someone for her loved ones.(BS-3) Najmah also feels that she needs to take back what she believes is hers.(TS)Najmah had gone through many experiences that changed her drastically from how she was before.
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(MIP-3)Najmah wants more for herself from her past life once she gets to Nusrat’s home and Nur comes back (SIP-A)-Najmah begins to feel like she has family again.(STEWE-1)Nusrat tries to introduce Najmah into her family so she doesn't feel alone.“‘So,’ she says,wiping the tears from her cheeks with the flat of her hand,a gesture that seems so motherly that her throat closes.’Do you need a place to stay?’The boy nods his head slowly”(192).Nusrat takes care of Najmah as if she was her mother which affects Najmah because it makes her feel like she has someone to take care of her and help her in a way that her family did.(STEWE-2)Najmah needs someone from her past life to help herself.“I run to Nur and throw my arms around him .His face crumples like a burning piece of paper when he sees me,and we stand face-to-face staring at each other for a long time.I am not aware of anything else in the world except that Nur is here at last”(251).Nur comes back to Najmah in the school and Najmah finally is reunited with one of the people she truly loves and one of the people that she had risked her life for.(SIP-B)Najmah becomes increasingly happy and making new plans to go back.(STEWE-1)Najmah kept on regaining basic skills that everyone should have such as the joy of laughing.“It feels as if the world might very well go on”(244).Najmah had grown not to have fun after she lost her family because she felt she must be serious about everything in order to succeed at her ultimate
(AGG) Najmah had encountered various dangerous threats to her life, but she managed to fight through it to become a fearless machine that’s only purpose was to save her family from falling.(BS-1) Najmah had to become a amazing leader in order to survive.(BS-2)In relation to this Najmah manages to “lose” her ability to fear something or someone for her loved ones.(BS-3) Najmah also feels that she needs to take back what she believes is hers.(TS)Najmah had gone through many experiences that changed her drastically from how she was before.
your first body paragraph: now write out your first body paragraph below. I have included the labels here. Remember, they go before the actual items just like in your sample essay. So, type each …show more content…
(MIP-3)Najmah wants more for herself from her past life once she gets to Nusrat’s home and Nur comes back (SIP-A)-Najmah begins to feel like she has family again.(STEWE-1)Nusrat tries to introduce Najmah into her family so she doesn't feel alone.“‘So,’ she says,wiping the tears from her cheeks with the flat of her hand,a gesture that seems so motherly that her throat closes.’Do you need a place to stay?’The boy nods his head slowly”(192).Nusrat takes care of Najmah as if she was her mother which affects Najmah because it makes her feel like she has someone to take care of her and help her in a way that her family did.(STEWE-2)Najmah needs someone from her past life to help herself.“I run to Nur and throw my arms around him .His face crumples like a burning piece of paper when he sees me,and we stand face-to-face staring at each other for a long time.I am not aware of anything else in the world except that Nur is here at last”(251).Nur comes back to Najmah in the school and Najmah finally is reunited with one of the people she truly loves and one of the people that she had risked her life for.(SIP-B)Najmah becomes increasingly happy and making new plans to go back.(STEWE-1)Najmah kept on regaining basic skills that everyone should have such as the joy of laughing.“It feels as if the world might very well go on”(244).Najmah had grown not to have fun after she lost her family because she felt she must be serious about everything in order to succeed at her ultimate