The Day I Shot Narrative

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Register to read the introduction… Me and my two partners (I never knew their names) are still trying to get all the money while someone’s watching the hostages and making sure that no one tries anything. Okay, we got all the money, 3 bags full. As I’m walking out I’m looking at this man, he was pale and looked terrified, I’m guessing about mid thirties for his age. That man stands up and runs for my partner but before he can reach him, I pulled the trigger and shot him. I look in his jacket and in the pocket was a wallet so I checked for his I.D. because every time I make a kill I like to know who it is. His name was Bill Bob, he was 37 and I checked a small pocket on the right side of the wallet and I see a picture of 2 young men probably in high school, he had 2 sons. It made me think, what if I was shot and how my kids would feel. I check his other pocket… he has a badge for NYPD. Killing a cop is not good when robbing a bank, actually it’s a thing no one should do …show more content…
He took the remote in the dead partners pocket and pressed the button and it blew a hole in the floor. I don’t remember him telling this part of the plan so I hesitated and asked, “Where are we going? Is this an emergency plan you had just in case something went wrong?” all he said was, “If you want to be rich, and not get caught by the fuzz then you better follow me.”

I couldn’t see through all the smoke from the explosion but when it cleared up I saw that it was a sewer now, I leaped down into the sewer following him. It smells terrible but I tried to not let it bother me. He stops and climbs up a ladder and right after I get up the ladder I open the hatch and I look to my right and I see the bank surrounded by police cars. My partner is already in the car as I take my last step off the ladder and I throw the duffle bag full of cash and slam the door, and of course put my

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