The Bargain-Personal Narrative

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”What are we going to do to when we get there,”JJ says as they entered the dark eerie forest, I found a creepy cabin in the middle of the forest, watch out there could be the landlady,”.
As we entered the forest to the meadow we could see the cabin through the the thick raspberry bushes,then JJ stopped.
“Is that the cabin?.he asks
“Yeah”, it's really shoddy,it definitely looks like nobody is living there all the stairs going up to the cabin are broken.as We walked up to the cabins broken steps JJ stops me.
“I don't know about this, I got a bad feeling”.
“No, it's fine there's nothing here, but let's go in”, I tried to act tough but really inside I was terrified of what could be in there but something about the cabin made me want to go in. When we got to the door we were so intrigued by the cabins shoddy look, JJ and I never noticed that
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JJ says as I got him up
“We need to get home before dark because we won't find are way back”I said as we begin walking towards the tree line.
As we started walking I could see the blood dripping from his jacket
“We need to go faster we won't make it out at this pace”.
Without asking JJ started to run I had always thought JJ was tough but I was dumbfounded to see him actually running even with the stab wound in his stomach but in my head I was screaming oh gosh we can die out here oh gosh oh gosh.
“You sure got that old lady for me”.
At that moment I knew that JJ could trust me.
We got home around nine o'clock we had barely made it and when we got there, my mom screamed in astonishment to see the horrible stab wound in JJ’s chest so my mom told us to get in the car and we raced off to the doctor's office. I had fallen asleep and when I woke up the next day,I saw JJ at the table cleaning his wound. “What did the doctor say about your stab wound?”.i asked “He said that I got a couple weeks before I can go on any more

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