Right from the start this essay was a train wreck of lazy mistakes, punctuation errors culminating in a weak underdeveloped thesis statement. A big part of this essay was proper paragraph development; the structure of the essay was decent. Quote integration was the essays largest defect, almost every quotation is improperly placed, most often I simply did not add my own personal comments after adding a quotation. Another harebrained mistake I made in this essay was putting two whole spaces between every paragraph. Writing six pages on the subject was tedious, but doubling the spaces between each paragraph was not a cheap attempt to stretch the content, just a lazy mistake that never got corrected. The essay contained the critical thinking that was required but was considerably deficient in every other requirement, lacking a proper thesis, punctuation, and paragraph development. Also my MLA citations need a bit of work; I defiantly need to make better use out of the OWL Perdu site when making my In-text citations and works citied page. A lot of the errors made in this essay were easily avoidable; I feel my greatest weakness in writing is in the revising, editing, and most importantly proofreading. Most of my mistakes would have been caught before being graded if I put a bit more scrutiny into my proofreading. This essay was certainly the hardest to get through, mainly because the essay lacked a general focus due to the thesis being so poor. Overall the essay didn’t get a terrible grade, and I have an increased understanding of how to write a better quality
Right from the start this essay was a train wreck of lazy mistakes, punctuation errors culminating in a weak underdeveloped thesis statement. A big part of this essay was proper paragraph development; the structure of the essay was decent. Quote integration was the essays largest defect, almost every quotation is improperly placed, most often I simply did not add my own personal comments after adding a quotation. Another harebrained mistake I made in this essay was putting two whole spaces between every paragraph. Writing six pages on the subject was tedious, but doubling the spaces between each paragraph was not a cheap attempt to stretch the content, just a lazy mistake that never got corrected. The essay contained the critical thinking that was required but was considerably deficient in every other requirement, lacking a proper thesis, punctuation, and paragraph development. Also my MLA citations need a bit of work; I defiantly need to make better use out of the OWL Perdu site when making my In-text citations and works citied page. A lot of the errors made in this essay were easily avoidable; I feel my greatest weakness in writing is in the revising, editing, and most importantly proofreading. Most of my mistakes would have been caught before being graded if I put a bit more scrutiny into my proofreading. This essay was certainly the hardest to get through, mainly because the essay lacked a general focus due to the thesis being so poor. Overall the essay didn’t get a terrible grade, and I have an increased understanding of how to write a better quality