Thank you Madilyn, for allowing me to read your story. First off let me say, you really did a good job of describing what tourists would suspect when coming to Alaska. You got all the relevant locations, which added a nice touch to your story. As being a fellow Alaskan, it was real nice that you use actual locations here in Fairbanks, Anchorage, and Barrow. You gave us a lot of detail in the beginning, which allow us to understand who, and where your characters were going. I love the little twist you added about the parents not being able to go along with the kids in Alaska that was a nice edition. We all know kids get in more trouble when parents are not around. You had couple of grammar issues, but nothing to major that a good proofreading
