The background paragraph does adequately inform the reader on how the controversy of how a teen's body image is hurt through the use of social media. This is done through the use of statistics on how teenagers already are self- conscious without social media, and a quote from a teen saying she is inseparable from his or her phone. In addition, it also has 2 pieces of evidence in the background paragraph. In considering the commentary, there is a lacking of it, which doesn't have a thorough explanation. In order to fix this, the author can elaborate on how the two quotes connect to each other by saying how much teens have started to value social media over a necessity like
