Consequences Of Teen Pregnancy

Register to read the introduction… So many teenagers drop out of school after having their babies, some even while they are pregnant. There is a small amount of teens that go on to receive their high school diploma even less go on to college. When teenager drops out of school they have a hard time finding a decent paying job to take care of themselves and their baby because of lack of education. This leads to teens being on welfare, for a source of income to supply the needs of their baby and themselves. There are cases when teen live in poverty with their children because of lack of education for a job.
A second consequence would be abuse and neglect. So many teenagers know so little about raising a child which sometimes leads to neglect or abuse. Some teens get irritated, easy because the baby is crying all night so they just let them cry. This is a form of neglect as well as not feeding the baby when they are hungry. Leaving a …show more content…
| The main point of this essay is to inform the audience of multiple dangers to teens and their child during pregnancy, and to inform of some of the consequences. | What is the greatest strength of this essay? | The greatest strength of this essay is that it is informative and not opinionated, which is what an expository essay is suppose to be. | Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. | The introduction does grab your attention, but is too short and not enough information. According to our week 7 reading, I do can not easily tell what type of introduction it is. Also the thesis statement has several errors in it (wrong contraction and last half needs to be reworded. | What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? | I think this student did a very good job making sure that all the paragraphs support the thesis statement.