Spending time as a family using technology in a fun creative way is good. Families can play games like angry birds to increase hand eye coordination, and Minecraft which gets our minds thinking. My son loves Minecraft and it’s simply amazing what he can do with this game. He has ADHD and Minecraft grabs his attention. He has already come to me and asked about building mods for the game! (He’s only 7) Technology helps bring families together by being able to communicate through apps like Facebook and skype. While there are many positives to technology unfortunately the bad outweighs the good especially in children. This is why a crucial plan of action is needed.
After examining the thesis statement and looking at everything that is presented above this section it is clear that my thesis presents a claim of policy, and value. Here are the reasons my claim pertains to both.
Policy-My thesis mentions an issue that needs to be resolved. The issue is that technology time needs to be less often and monitored by parents. There is a plan of action to reduce the times to two 90 or 45 minute sessions a