It was by far the most challenging of the three essays as well as my worst essay. I wrote mine over technology and how it effects humans. I found two articles related to the topic. One supported technology usage and had support from studies. The other article pointed out some of technologies greatest drawbacks. My synthesis of the two said that we need a healthy balance of technology. I drew points and factual information from both articles to form my synthesis, however it did not turn out as strong as I had hoped for. I found myself using filler information just to complete the essay and that is always a bad sign. My first two essays were exponentially more well written than this
It was by far the most challenging of the three essays as well as my worst essay. I wrote mine over technology and how it effects humans. I found two articles related to the topic. One supported technology usage and had support from studies. The other article pointed out some of technologies greatest drawbacks. My synthesis of the two said that we need a healthy balance of technology. I drew points and factual information from both articles to form my synthesis, however it did not turn out as strong as I had hoped for. I found myself using filler information just to complete the essay and that is always a bad sign. My first two essays were exponentially more well written than this