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Topic Sentence:
Hi. I’m Rafe Khatchadorian and can my life get any worse?

Supporting Sentence one:
The first bad thing that happened to me was that my school, Air Brook Community School, was shutting down permanently, which meant I had to go back to Hills Village Middle School. That school had so many rules, and since I broke all the rules I got suspended from there.

Supporting Sentence two:
The second bad thing that happened to me was that Hills Village Middle School wouldn’t even let me in because they don’t want me to break the rules again. Supporting Sentence three:
Last bad thing that happened was that I had to do a program to get back into Hills Village Middle School. They gave my mom a brochure but I couldn’t see it clearly.

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