Her point then begins to stray off topic which drastically decreases the quality of her article. However, she continues on and later uses a Jeremih song from 2009 as her main evidence that “hip-hop invented sex”. It was his lyrics that introduced the idea of focusing sexual pleasure on women that changed how sex was perceived. Carpentier uses great examples to support that the popular Jeremih song “Birthday Sex” which started a chain reaction of male rappers putting the spotlight on women’s needs in bed as well as a competition of who can pleasure women best. Once she brings her article to a close, she begins to stray away from her main points
Her point then begins to stray off topic which drastically decreases the quality of her article. However, she continues on and later uses a Jeremih song from 2009 as her main evidence that “hip-hop invented sex”. It was his lyrics that introduced the idea of focusing sexual pleasure on women that changed how sex was perceived. Carpentier uses great examples to support that the popular Jeremih song “Birthday Sex” which started a chain reaction of male rappers putting the spotlight on women’s needs in bed as well as a competition of who can pleasure women best. Once she brings her article to a close, she begins to stray away from her main points