Creative Writing: The Cave Of Horrors

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anna waters sept. 14, 2015

The Cave of Horrors

There was a huge gaping cave. Dark, black, ominous. My mom and I timidly stepped in. The floors were cool and damp. The air felt clammy and trapping.We advanced further and came upon a log with a glass door, I went to open it but my mom held me back, “don’t go in there.” she warned me. “ A mean lady lives there and if you trespass she’ll bite you!”
I quickly backed away. A dark figure had appeared behind the door. she had black pits for eyes and her sharp teeth were barred. Hanging from her earlobes were heavy jade earrings. A shiver ran down my spine. My mom and I hurried on.

A few hundred feet up the path I began to feel weird ,like something was about to jump out at me. I gripped
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Hiding behind a large purple velvet couch my mom and I observed that the robot 's business was a large one and there were many of them roaming around the place. I looked at the map Lee had drawn us and saw the staircase leading up to the storage facility. "she 's up there.", I whispered to my mom pointing. "There 's no way we can just run over there" she said. "I 'll distract them and you go." My mom threw our smoke bomb (Lee 's father had been well prepared) far away from the staircase. I dashed to the stairs and and ran up them two at a time hoping the robots would be too fascinated by the smoke to notice me. Reaching the top I again refrenced the ma. If Lee 's info was correct, she should be in room 2A. I walked in hoping that my own mother was okay. "Samantha?" ,I called softly, "Are you …show more content…
After many more hours of walking we arrived back at the entrance where we could walk out and be free again. My mom and I were about to go when the Mean Lady saw us. She jumped through her door and lunged at us screeching inhuman noises. Without even considering the consequences my mom and I tturend and ran as fast as we could. Then I heard a yell of pain. My mom had sprained her ankle tripping over a rock. She slumpeddown crying in pain. Meanwhile the Mean Lady had advanced on us further until she was almost upon us. I grabbed a bunch of heavy rocks and began flinging them at her. One hit her head and she barelu had time to register how much it hurt before alling to the floor. I slipped my mom 's arm over my shoulde and helped her hobble back towards the entrance going as fast as i could hoping the robots the Mean Lady probably had called couldnt catch up with us in

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