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An essay having a strong thesis statement is crucial. The introduction catches the reader’s attention, allowing them to maintain interest in the topic you are discussing. When it comes to my writing, I pride myself in a strong introduction. I focus most of my time on making sure my essay has a strong thesis. In doing this, it helps to generate an interesting essay and ensures that the reader understands the point being discussed.
The body of an essay needs to support the thesis. In the video, James talked about how the body of an essay should have three main reasons and then supporting ideas that explain those reasons. It is vital that the body of your essay relates to your thesis. I intend on using these tips to ensure that my essay's are

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