I enjoyed reading your post. From the material presented, you have a good argument. The format follows APA guidelines and the in-text citations and references have proper formatting as well. Additionally, the work is within the word count limits. You have excellent strengths in your work this week.
However, there are weaknesses in this work that detract from your overall effort. The first sentence “A Customer centered organization is a organization” has a few errors. To correct these errors, the word “Customer” needs a lowercase c and the phrase needs an “an” before the second organization. Another instance of a word that needs lower case occurs is the word probability in the phrase “such as this one Probability sampling”. Grammar wise, …show more content…
As written, the sentence is confusing and the point is difficult to understand. Likewise, the first and second sentences in the second paragraph seem to contradict themselves. The first sentence has a negative connotation whereas the second sentence describes the attributes for positive customer service. A suggestion is to rephrase the first sentence to emphasize positive customer service.
Although I believe you answered the question, a recommendation is expand the discussion or add material in the probability sampling portion as there are only four sentences that support your point. Lastly, the work lacks a biblical integration. The grading rubric requires a biblical integration.
Overall, your writing style is excellent; however, the recommendations offered are ways to improve on your format to earn the grade that matches your work. “As each has received a gift, use it to serve one another, as good stewards of God’s varied grace” (1 Peter 4:10 ESV). With the team mindset, we use our gifts to help others. The recommendations are ways to strengthen your writing skills to achieve victory in this
However, there are weaknesses in this work that detract from your overall effort. The first sentence “A Customer centered organization is a organization” has a few errors. To correct these errors, the word “Customer” needs a lowercase c and the phrase needs an “an” before the second organization. Another instance of a word that needs lower case occurs is the word probability in the phrase “such as this one Probability sampling”. Grammar wise, …show more content…
As written, the sentence is confusing and the point is difficult to understand. Likewise, the first and second sentences in the second paragraph seem to contradict themselves. The first sentence has a negative connotation whereas the second sentence describes the attributes for positive customer service. A suggestion is to rephrase the first sentence to emphasize positive customer service.
Although I believe you answered the question, a recommendation is expand the discussion or add material in the probability sampling portion as there are only four sentences that support your point. Lastly, the work lacks a biblical integration. The grading rubric requires a biblical integration.
Overall, your writing style is excellent; however, the recommendations offered are ways to improve on your format to earn the grade that matches your work. “As each has received a gift, use it to serve one another, as good stewards of God’s varied grace” (1 Peter 4:10 ESV). With the team mindset, we use our gifts to help others. The recommendations are ways to strengthen your writing skills to achieve victory in this