Stereotypes Cause A Negative Effect On Society

Whether or not stereotypes are causing a negative effect on society, there must be a few things stated about this argumentative essay. Firstly, the grammatical errors are an eyesore and can deter a reader from finishing the reading. The entire essay was written under the false assumption about stereotypes. The structure of the essay was mostly missing, though there was an attempt at paragraphs, there was no citations or indentations. In all honesty, the essay was just a mess due to the grammatical errors. There were common mistakes such as using past tense words in the place of present tense words. One example being the using of the word negatives in the place of negative. The author did not use proper punctuation. In a proper essay, conjunctions should not be used, while in the essay, it was a common occurrence. It was apparent that the writing was not proof read because many of these mistakes could have been corrected. If the author does not seem educated, the reader will have a hard time believing what the author is telling them. This essay makes the author seem like they did not care enough to correct the mistakes and make a proper argument. …show more content…
The author defined stereotypes as putting labels on a person, about how they should act and live, which is incorrect. A stereotype is a widely held idea of a particular person or thing, which is more or less a biased generalization. The idea that the author is most likely trying to get across is racism. They bring up an example of a Nigerian woman told to play her tribal music, which makes her more subjective to racism. The examples that the author brought in are more associated with racism than with