Starkey's Checklist In A Short Story

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You applied most of the Starkey’s checklist in this story. First, you developed the character’s desires and traits throughout the story. You did clear some of the confusion which helped improve your storyline. Second, you limited the setting to one place which is one of the major concepts of short stories. Third, you made the conflict clear for the readers. Finally, you captured the reader’s attention.

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