The beginning of the speech built a relationship with the audience by describing average people’s activity with the words “you” and “me”. This part worked very well to gain attention and form a bond with the audience.
Another good quality of this speech was the way it described the supporting materials. By referring to each supporting materials adequately, the speech gained credibility.
The speech also did a great job in summarizing its content. By reinforcing changing gender roles, softer jobs preference, and mass retirement issue; the speech effectively strengthened its content by highlighting the main ideas.
In the meantime, the speech also described the rhetorical situation very well. However, this part might also need an attention because
Another good quality of this speech was the way it described the supporting materials. By referring to each supporting materials adequately, the speech gained credibility.
The speech also did a great job in summarizing its content. By reinforcing changing gender roles, softer jobs preference, and mass retirement issue; the speech effectively strengthened its content by highlighting the main ideas.
In the meantime, the speech also described the rhetorical situation very well. However, this part might also need an attention because