Hi Cathy! You did a good job presenting your speech. However, I would like to give you a few tips that might help the next time you try presenting something. The first thing I noticed was the gum you are chewing. For some people chewing gum seems unprofessional and distracting. Try to focus on engaging your audience by using eye contact. Eye contact lets the audience know that you know what you are talking about and are confident enough to not look at a piece of paper the whole time. Another subject that ties into this is your usage of the words “like” and “um.” Using these words to fill in spaces is never a good idea. I would recommend looking up words that transition smoothly through out your speech. Make sure to end your speech with a clear
