After receiving feedback from both Mr. Sherrill and my classmates’ peer reviews, I need to begin working on my final edit of my project. In this final edit, I propose that I address three crucial areas of concern. The areas of concern being solidifying my argument, explaining my excerpt, and developing better transitions.
Solidifying my Argument
To present my argument in a stronger fashion, I need to tie my rhetorical strategies back to my argument. To do this, I’ve talked to Mr. Sherrill in his office hours and he gave me great suggestions. I’ll start by analyzing the last sentences in each of my paragraphs. These are the sentences that need to better relate to my argument. I will use the “Paragraphs” resource given to us in class to structure
Solidifying my Argument
To present my argument in a stronger fashion, I need to tie my rhetorical strategies back to my argument. To do this, I’ve talked to Mr. Sherrill in his office hours and he gave me great suggestions. I’ll start by analyzing the last sentences in each of my paragraphs. These are the sentences that need to better relate to my argument. I will use the “Paragraphs” resource given to us in class to structure