1. Hello Allysa, after reading you blog analysis I believe you did a great job on items 1, 3 and 5. You did a great job keeping within the required 500-600 words. You also made sure to write your analysis completely in third person. Your two examples were also very well done. They were very easy to read and understand. You also clearly explained how they tie into Newman’s concepts.
2. After reading your analysis I noticed that Newman’s concept that states how social class can affect every aspect of an individual’s life. This can tie into the article because lower income families in Chicago are struggling and a main reason affecting them are lack of resources including income and education. We have learned how social status can influence everything about someone’s life. (Newman 2016:124)
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For your next blog, I noticed you could improve on items 1, 2 and 4. You had two concepts from the textbook, but I believe more could have been explained about the concept. Maybe go into a bit more detail putting the concept in your own words. You also could improve your sociological analysis. You seemed to have parts in your analysis that had some opinion to it and you can improve your paper if you make sure not to state any opinion for your next analysis. You only really had two items that could be improved on so I am going to say for item 1 to make sure you don’t go over your word limit. You didn’t go over but you were close. If I didn’t have to name three items I would not have mentioned it. You only had two items that need
2. After reading your analysis I noticed that Newman’s concept that states how social class can affect every aspect of an individual’s life. This can tie into the article because lower income families in Chicago are struggling and a main reason affecting them are lack of resources including income and education. We have learned how social status can influence everything about someone’s life. (Newman 2016:124)
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For your next blog, I noticed you could improve on items 1, 2 and 4. You had two concepts from the textbook, but I believe more could have been explained about the concept. Maybe go into a bit more detail putting the concept in your own words. You also could improve your sociological analysis. You seemed to have parts in your analysis that had some opinion to it and you can improve your paper if you make sure not to state any opinion for your next analysis. You only really had two items that could be improved on so I am going to say for item 1 to make sure you don’t go over your word limit. You didn’t go over but you were close. If I didn’t have to name three items I would not have mentioned it. You only had two items that need