1. Amber
2. I like this because this research paper outline has similar topic as mine, which is “Social Media”. I can see the different perspective of the social media that how does it effects to women. I liked the took because it introduces well about what the research will discuss about and suggest specific time period, “What are the impacts of social media’s unrealistic images to women around the world in the past ten years?” (Amber). Additionally, this outline has clear thesis statement. Overall, every section is organizing correctly and following the instruction format.
3. This document formatted using correct MLA style that constructed with double-space, legible font (e.g. Times New Roman, 12 pt), and cited each quotation correctly. …show more content…
This document contains a working thesis with three avenues of discussion at the end, “The social media’s unrealistic images of beauty has impacts on women such as disparaging portrayal, gender equality and women’s rights, and women’s health” (Amber).
5. There are body sections for each avenue of discussion. Each body sections contains main idea of the paragraph. Additionally, each body sections have the correctly integrated quotations and thoughtful analysis of each quotation.
6. There is a topic sentence for each body section. The topic sentence inked with each avenue, reason, and the thesis statement of the discussion.
7. There is a brief conclusion in this document. There is five of brief conclusion that summarize each body sections with the main idea and explains why is the reason reaffirms the thesis.
8. There is a correctly-formatted works cited section, but it needs to be sure to alphabetize the order of each citations.
9. In each body section, it contains three quotes, summaries and paraphrases with in-text citations, full sentences (no fragments or bullet points), and outline formatting, such as Roman numerals or Arabic numbering and …show more content…
This document formatted using MLA style that each quotation integrated correctly and cited to give a credit to the author.
3. It contains a working thesis with three avenues of discussion at the end, “Body image is a controversial topic that has surfaced throughout generations and is being taken more severely among teenagers and young adults from the media due to maturity, the socialized conformity, and the target towards them” (Park). This thesis statement is strong enough to state her position that how the media creates the body images and how it affects to teenagers and young adults. It contains three supporting reasons: maturity, the socialized conformity, and the target towards.
4. There are body sections for each avenue of discussion. Each body section contains of topic sentence, three supporting details, and the analysis of the supporting details. Each supporting detail is including MLA citation, and it also has the analysis that why the supporting detail is emphasizes and reaffirms the thesis.
5. There is a topic sentence for each body section. The topic sentence state the main reason that linked with the thesis statement.
6. There is a brief conclusion that restate the thesis, and contains three reasons why each avenue reaffirms the thesis in this
2. I like this because this research paper outline has similar topic as mine, which is “Social Media”. I can see the different perspective of the social media that how does it effects to women. I liked the took because it introduces well about what the research will discuss about and suggest specific time period, “What are the impacts of social media’s unrealistic images to women around the world in the past ten years?” (Amber). Additionally, this outline has clear thesis statement. Overall, every section is organizing correctly and following the instruction format.
3. This document formatted using correct MLA style that constructed with double-space, legible font (e.g. Times New Roman, 12 pt), and cited each quotation correctly. …show more content…
This document contains a working thesis with three avenues of discussion at the end, “The social media’s unrealistic images of beauty has impacts on women such as disparaging portrayal, gender equality and women’s rights, and women’s health” (Amber).
5. There are body sections for each avenue of discussion. Each body sections contains main idea of the paragraph. Additionally, each body sections have the correctly integrated quotations and thoughtful analysis of each quotation.
6. There is a topic sentence for each body section. The topic sentence inked with each avenue, reason, and the thesis statement of the discussion.
7. There is a brief conclusion in this document. There is five of brief conclusion that summarize each body sections with the main idea and explains why is the reason reaffirms the thesis.
8. There is a correctly-formatted works cited section, but it needs to be sure to alphabetize the order of each citations.
9. In each body section, it contains three quotes, summaries and paraphrases with in-text citations, full sentences (no fragments or bullet points), and outline formatting, such as Roman numerals or Arabic numbering and …show more content…
This document formatted using MLA style that each quotation integrated correctly and cited to give a credit to the author.
3. It contains a working thesis with three avenues of discussion at the end, “Body image is a controversial topic that has surfaced throughout generations and is being taken more severely among teenagers and young adults from the media due to maturity, the socialized conformity, and the target towards them” (Park). This thesis statement is strong enough to state her position that how the media creates the body images and how it affects to teenagers and young adults. It contains three supporting reasons: maturity, the socialized conformity, and the target towards.
4. There are body sections for each avenue of discussion. Each body section contains of topic sentence, three supporting details, and the analysis of the supporting details. Each supporting detail is including MLA citation, and it also has the analysis that why the supporting detail is emphasizes and reaffirms the thesis.
5. There is a topic sentence for each body section. The topic sentence state the main reason that linked with the thesis statement.
6. There is a brief conclusion that restate the thesis, and contains three reasons why each avenue reaffirms the thesis in this