Despite what most people think, Soccer is a very simple game. In order to play a game of soccer, you will need eleven people per team and two teams per game. In addition, it is helpful to have a referee. Each player will need to have a team jersey to wear for the game. As well as shin guards, socks and cleats. In addition, each team will need to have a goal net that should be placed at either end of the field, along with a soccer ball. Once all these are acquired you are ready to have a soccer game. [Your complex sentence structure is awkward due to the lack of a comma between main and subordinate clause. Where do you need to insert a comma in this sentence?]
The first step playing soccer is to obtain a Soccer field. The Size of the field is …show more content…
Your team should consist of 11 players including a goalkeeper. [Your content development is a bit awkward due to the lack of coherence between the topic sentence (focusing on the team) and the supporting statement (rules of play). What is the focus of this paragraph going to be?] Normally each player is assigned a position that informs the player on where to stay on the field. Soccer positions consist of forwards, midfielders, defenders and the goalkeeper. Each player has a unique job on the field. Forwards are responsible for making goals on the opponent's goal. Defenders are the ones who help their own goalkeeper and defending their goal. Midfielders are the ones who can either help out the offense or help the defense, it all depends on where the game is heading. As a goalkeeper long as your goalkeeper is in the goalies' box they can touch the ball with their hands. Typically, once you have a field and team's you are ready to have a game. One team will be in possession of the ball with the objective to get it down the field and to the opposite side to score a goal. While the other team is trying to defend that goal and keep them from making the goal. As well as steal the ball and make it to their goal to score a point. The team with the most goals at the end of the game wins. The game of soccer is an easy game if you simply follow these basic steps. The steps that are listed are very broad, basic and straight to the point. Soccer can be more in depth if one wished. Once you are similar with these steps you can easily add more rules to make the game
The first step playing soccer is to obtain a Soccer field. The Size of the field is …show more content…
Your team should consist of 11 players including a goalkeeper. [Your content development is a bit awkward due to the lack of coherence between the topic sentence (focusing on the team) and the supporting statement (rules of play). What is the focus of this paragraph going to be?] Normally each player is assigned a position that informs the player on where to stay on the field. Soccer positions consist of forwards, midfielders, defenders and the goalkeeper. Each player has a unique job on the field. Forwards are responsible for making goals on the opponent's goal. Defenders are the ones who help their own goalkeeper and defending their goal. Midfielders are the ones who can either help out the offense or help the defense, it all depends on where the game is heading. As a goalkeeper long as your goalkeeper is in the goalies' box they can touch the ball with their hands. Typically, once you have a field and team's you are ready to have a game. One team will be in possession of the ball with the objective to get it down the field and to the opposite side to score a goal. While the other team is trying to defend that goal and keep them from making the goal. As well as steal the ball and make it to their goal to score a point. The team with the most goals at the end of the game wins. The game of soccer is an easy game if you simply follow these basic steps. The steps that are listed are very broad, basic and straight to the point. Soccer can be more in depth if one wished. Once you are similar with these steps you can easily add more rules to make the game