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It was supposed to be a normal class in Mr Volk’s class, until it started snowing outside and the topic came up. “Isn’t there an old tale about snowflakes and where they come from?” Kai asked. “I don’t know what you’re talking about, it’s not snowing, we’re clearly at a race track.” said Colton while using his VR pod. Mr. Volk makes him put away the VR pod, “But I was using that!” exclaimed Colton. “Well now we will discuss what Kai has brought up,” Mr Volk said “and maybe you’ll understand something besides video games. It may snow diamonds here, but back in the 2000’s, snow was white and made of water all the way over on other planets and moons”. “Wait so Neptune isn’t the only planet we’ve lived on?” Colton asked. “Don’t you ever pick up …show more content…
They reached the top of the mountain where he lived. There they found his name and he was fighting a man in a dark cloak. The man wielding a malice and the dog wielding a large snowball. “Get over here Deuss!”, but to his avail, the man could not attack the dog since he was too swift. The humans intervened and stopped the assailant. He explained that he hated the cold months and wished to get rid of the dog so he would not have to experience them. The dog understood this man’s actions, but sent him to death anyway, as he almost set off the world’s balance. He was killed mercilessly and that was the end of his torment to Deuss. He thanked them for helping and granted all fifteen of them anything they wished. They all asked for one thing, for it to snow for the next thirty years he would live. He granted them all their wish and they went on. THe next dog came and every other dog after that and the cycle never stopped.” “That was a good story Kai, thank you for that, and it distracted Colton from his VR pod.” said Mr. Volk as he looked over at Colton using his VR pod to watch white snow. “Now I’m gonna take this until the end of cl-”

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