When I look at the interpretations, writer connect their personal ideas give a child knowledge the telephone ring sound and also writer connect the idea recognized the items. In my opinion the observation seems fine with me and this description can be stay in the same way.
Observation #3, The writer uses objective language very easy to understand details and the writer concepts used the child picked up the train and knowledge the connect the train line together. On the whole the description seems to me a little bit short if writer choice another observation to write it might be more focused on the description.
When I look at the interpretations the writer connect the idea about the child get to know the train names and also when I look at the interpretation the writer connects the child loves the train books. Also ended of the interpretations, I saw a missing informations and writer tells about the reading book can be tired.I would recommend to the writer give more information about the