Shyam Narrative

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Where’d You Get That?
Shyam, an eleven year old boy who has black hair, likes blue and plays video games. It was pouring hard outside of Shyam’s house in the morning when a car parked outside of my house and the door opened. A shadowy figure seeming quickly approached my door and started whacking it, I sprint into the basement and grab a wooden plank just to brace myself. I slowly twist the knob letting the doors mechanisms release and open, about to whack who I think is an intruder… It turns out to be Jonny. “Woah, since when did you become so cautious, Shyam!” Jonny alarming said in a louder than normal tone. “Just being cautious, I mean look at the weather it completely describes a setting of something bad happening in every
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We crash down in a place that looks very ancient and dusty, when we come to our senses we see a blurred figure of someone who looks like a gladiator. We hear everyone chanting “TETRAITES, TETRAITES, TETRAITES, TETRAITES”. We both knew we had something to fear, but neither wanted to look like we were scared. So we knew we had to do something to beat this guy or else we will be one life lesser than we have WHICH IS ONE, we then thought that if we grabbed his legs we could bring him down and win without taking anything too risky of a move. We manage to take him out and get outta there as fast as possible and after that, Jonny starts yelling, lecturing and all sorts of stuff because I pressed the button on the time machine and got us into this. You could say I deserved it, maybe because I honestly did deserve it. I suggested we could try pressing buttons, if we got here by pressing buttons we can get out by pressing buttons and I think Jonny liked that idea because he smiled and said “Let’s try it out.” like he forgot all about me messing up and getting us here. “Here goes nothing!” we both said and smashed the buttons! This time we learned how to ride the portal and managed to surf it “CALABUNGA BABY!” we

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