I enjoy the background, he picked. It really goes with the theme of the hero’s journey. However he read right off the slides. It shows that he didn't really understands what he was presenting.
Carlson, Cameron-
I enjoy the picture he added. The picture describe the steps perfectly, I also enjoy how it when smoothly and didn't confuse the audience. My classmates and I understand everything perfectly. And he showed a lot of work in this project.
Dundon, Meagan- Katniss Everdeen
I like how she elaborated on the steps. I also like how she spoke loudly. it was easy to hear her. This shows that she understand what she was presenting and was convinced on her work.
Egan, Stephen (Ryan)- Creed
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However it was really distracting when she was flipping to the back of the book and back to the step she was on.
Romero, Manuel- I like how he organizes his slides. His slides were easy to follow and it went smoothly. This shows he put efforts in his work. I also like how he elaborated on his hero and our classmate could understand and follow smoothly.
Sanchez, Gianni- Joy
I like how she put the trailer in the project. It showed us a little of the movie to understand Joy’s journey. However she didn't elaborate and didn't proof read it. There’s been a little error in her project. She didn’t fully explain the 12 steps of the hero’s journey or the step to her hero's journey.
Smith, Rexford- Neo
I like how he knew everything about his hero. It really shows that he worked hard on the project. However the background, he pick was a little distracting. He could've pick a different background to represent his hero.
Vasquez-Guzman, Scarley- Manny
I like how she elaborated on her hero, Manny. It helps us understand the 12 steps of the hero’s journey and Manny’s journey However she spoke quietly. So, it was difficult for our classmates hear