Introduction
Hook-Jaws could wash up to the shore and attack you like he killed the people in the movie.
Attacher-In Jaws the shark washed up pretty close to the beach and ate a lot of human beings because the life guards weren't looking out good enough to see the shark the shark. That's why we need beaches to work harder with watching beaches.
Thesis- Shark attacks are a real threat to people and animals,and Wildwood should do more to prevent this threat.
Body #1- History of shark attacks that happened earlier.
Topic sentence- The history happened in the past but can still happen again you just have to keep an eye out.
Example- According to Sarah Glover “ shark emerged from the water with its mouth open and triangular 2-inch teeth showing” …show more content…
Example- There was a summer traveler named Kristen Kelly “ She witnessed a pair of sharks feast on a dolphin” (“Watch: Witness captures shark …show more content…
Explanation-Many Lee was tracked close to close to wildwood,and many people swim in wildwood they should warn the people not to go out to deep.
Transition/Wrap-up- All the shark attacks, and shark sighting can happen less if you do what is told.
Body #2- How?
Topic sentence-This is telling you how we can prevent less shark attacks and sightings.
Example-The lifeguards of the Jersey shore have “ competitions showcase the various skills lifeguards use in their work as protectors of the beach and surf across South Jersey” (Cape May Super Athalon”).
Explanation-Lifeguards can stop shark attacks if they look out, and do what they do at the races more. They can have more lifeguard on duty to help and then possibly more people will come to the beach.
Transition/Wrap-up- If this does not happen soon less people will be at the beach and they will have more consequences to look out for shark attacks.
Body #3- What are the consequences?
Topic sentence-There are many consequences if you don't look out more or you get more look out people.
Example-According to the Marine Mammal Stranding Center “in Brigantine, says the sharks go where the food is” (Great White shark
Hook-Jaws could wash up to the shore and attack you like he killed the people in the movie.
Attacher-In Jaws the shark washed up pretty close to the beach and ate a lot of human beings because the life guards weren't looking out good enough to see the shark the shark. That's why we need beaches to work harder with watching beaches.
Thesis- Shark attacks are a real threat to people and animals,and Wildwood should do more to prevent this threat.
Body #1- History of shark attacks that happened earlier.
Topic sentence- The history happened in the past but can still happen again you just have to keep an eye out.
Example- According to Sarah Glover “ shark emerged from the water with its mouth open and triangular 2-inch teeth showing” …show more content…
Example- There was a summer traveler named Kristen Kelly “ She witnessed a pair of sharks feast on a dolphin” (“Watch: Witness captures shark …show more content…
Explanation-Many Lee was tracked close to close to wildwood,and many people swim in wildwood they should warn the people not to go out to deep.
Transition/Wrap-up- All the shark attacks, and shark sighting can happen less if you do what is told.
Body #2- How?
Topic sentence-This is telling you how we can prevent less shark attacks and sightings.
Example-The lifeguards of the Jersey shore have “ competitions showcase the various skills lifeguards use in their work as protectors of the beach and surf across South Jersey” (Cape May Super Athalon”).
Explanation-Lifeguards can stop shark attacks if they look out, and do what they do at the races more. They can have more lifeguard on duty to help and then possibly more people will come to the beach.
Transition/Wrap-up- If this does not happen soon less people will be at the beach and they will have more consequences to look out for shark attacks.
Body #3- What are the consequences?
Topic sentence-There are many consequences if you don't look out more or you get more look out people.
Example-According to the Marine Mammal Stranding Center “in Brigantine, says the sharks go where the food is” (Great White shark