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Anastasios Dernalakis gave me feedback for my Week 3 essay assignment. He mentioned a few things that were not clear to him, such as the obstacles that Seth faced during his career. He believed them to be “achievements” but not obstacles to be overcome. Anastasios questioned if these examples were not of obstacles but of business ventures and opportunities. He was also unclear about what Kickstarter was, and requested further explanation. Finally, he made a suggestion about how I could conclude my essay with a statement about Seth’s “unorthodox”

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