Secon Second Response Essay

First response- This student most definitely understands the values of each character, and is able to draw conclusions about what each character thinks about another from the text. It is also very impressing that the student is able to give reason as to why Duchess Berwick feels the way she feels about marriage, that reason being that she is married. Not only does the student make reference to the characters values, but completely answers the question by addressing the society that the characters live in. Through this, the student is able to mention the affects the society has on the characters. Based on this student's high awareness of what is going on in this scene, how well they are able to answer the question by making justificable inferences, and how clear this student presents their ideas, they received a seven. In reality, this student scored an eight and my score for this essay is most likely lower because my interpretation of this student's case was slightly critical. …show more content…
The case would be much stronger if the student made more reference to the text instead of just stating what the character says. Sentence structure also seems repetitive. There is are three instances where "Lord Darlington" is the opening to three sentences, two of which were back to back. Moving on to the ladies of the play, the student does very well at saying what their values are and provides decent evidence to support their claim. Overall, this student does a good job at answering the prompt, but since they have some slight flaws, such as little support to defend their answer to Lord Darlington's values, and some repetitive structure, this student received a five. This student actually did receive a five, meaning my judgement of it was on