School: A Fictional Narrative

This is the point of no return. Five kids; three girls and two boys. Once they walk through here they won't get back out, at least, not without a fight. The girls are Ally, Cierra, and Jordyn. The boys are Alex and Xavier. They are all just friends at school, but their friendship will be put to the test. One week ago Xavier made a plan to go look through the old abandoned jail that for some reason the city won't tear down. He wanted to see what was inside there and what was the big deal that everyone in town tells stories about it. The five friends were now standing at the doorway ready to see if those stories really were true. The girls make Xavier go in first, because it was his idea. Then they follow, only to see a long dark hallway, …show more content…
“It must be locked from the outside.” said Xavier. Ally said, “We need to find a different way out then.” They started walking down the dark hallways. When they got back to the bodies, they didn't know where to go. They didn't want to split up because the place was so creepy. Then, Jordyn said, “Wait, does anyone have their phones?” Everyone did, but the jail cell was in the middle of nowhere so there was no service. “It's getting darker out,” said Alex, “so we should try to find a light switch.” They looked, but couldn't find one. Then the heard a noise that all them knew wasn't just a coincidence. It was a heavy door opening and slamming. Everyone went quiet. All they heard was two people mumbling, and only Xavier could make out some words. “Guys,” he said “They said they're going to find whoever came in here.” Just then, they heard footsteps coming down the …show more content…
The footsteps stopped in the room that they were in. No one even dared to breathe. They heard one of the men talk, he said, “Are you sure they're are kids somewhere in here?” The other man said, “Well, we got the message that the door got open, and the camera in the door caught five kids.” The other man said, “Hopefully they are dumb enough to split up, because then we find five kids and not one whole group. We will have a better chance with five separate people in different places, rather than one group who could be anywhere.” The other man said, “Yea, and anyways if there was a big group, there's five of them and two of us, some will get away.” They all heard the footsteps leave. They all breathed a sigh of relief. “That was close,” said Cierra. “We need to be more careful. We don't know who they are, or what they will do to us,” said Alex. “Wait,” said Jordyn, “We heard them come down some stairs. They came in through a door upstairs. Maybe, we could go find that door and leave.” “Good idea,” said Xavier, “We need to be quiet on those stairs. They make a lot of noise. Don't make any noise, we can't be caught.” All of the friends slowly go towards the stairs that the murders had just came down minutes before. One by one they went up the