Instead, she could have defined what Schizophrenia and Catatonia are first. And specify how these illnesses could impact individual and his/her family as a whole. I liked her thesis statement though as she asked questions on Schizophrenia and Catatonia symptoms and their treatments. She finishes her thesis by noting that the solution could assist a person with the illness and his/her family as well. Also, I liked the way concluded her research with something memorable. She shared her own family story that helped readers understand why her research matter to them after they have finished reading the
Instead, she could have defined what Schizophrenia and Catatonia are first. And specify how these illnesses could impact individual and his/her family as a whole. I liked her thesis statement though as she asked questions on Schizophrenia and Catatonia symptoms and their treatments. She finishes her thesis by noting that the solution could assist a person with the illness and his/her family as well. Also, I liked the way concluded her research with something memorable. She shared her own family story that helped readers understand why her research matter to them after they have finished reading the