Save The World Mccgonigal Rhetorical Analysis

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Video games can help us improve friendship by teaching us determination and motivation. These character traits can benefit a relationship because they are qualities that are highly respected by the masses. If you are able to acquire these valuable traits it’s likely you will be able to build longer lasting relationships. I believe that all games not just video games can help people bond at a higher level because they allow us to be part of a team effort and accomplish the ultimate objective of the game. In the article, “Be a gamer save the world Mccgonigal would have been more effective by including more details when she uses the rhetorical device Logos, she referenced studies at the University of Pennsylvania and Harvard but did not provide

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