Sometimes the people in the writing center don’t really know what they talk about because one time I needed help with the ad analysis. I had a paragraph of credible sources that had reactions that the tutor had me cut out (like a Saturday Live Night skit, multiple magazine articles, and etc.) Like the tutor said that she never watched the Saturday Live Night Skit about the Kendall Jenner ad and claimed it wasn’t relevant to my analysis but it was in a paragraph about the reactions that she to cut out. Then I sent it to my friend to another set of eyes to look at it. And my friend told me that I needed a paragraph of the outraged reactions from the commercial and that I needed to analyze some more things that I noticed from the commercial.
