For example, she did not touch upon her sales and profitability of the business until the question was asked. I would have included this when discussing the investment that I was looking for. She also didn’t mention anything about the business scalability or how she was planning on getting any kind of market share. The product that she was providing was just a different take on products that are already in the market place. If she could have provided a plan on how she was going to increase sales and market her product to grow her business she may have gotten a better response from the investors. Overall since her business was not profitable and she didn’t define a clear plan on how she would make the business profitable with the investment that she was asking for I would consider this a below average elevator
For example, she did not touch upon her sales and profitability of the business until the question was asked. I would have included this when discussing the investment that I was looking for. She also didn’t mention anything about the business scalability or how she was planning on getting any kind of market share. The product that she was providing was just a different take on products that are already in the market place. If she could have provided a plan on how she was going to increase sales and market her product to grow her business she may have gotten a better response from the investors. Overall since her business was not profitable and she didn’t define a clear plan on how she would make the business profitable with the investment that she was asking for I would consider this a below average elevator