Essay Outline
Introduction
Hook: Salva's everyday struggle has shown how difficult life can be. In Sudan, people had to go through some of his exact problems every day in the Sudanese civil war.
Transition Sentence(name of the book and brief background knowledge of Sudanese war and Salva): In a Long Walk to Water by Linda Sue Park, Salva experiences many challenges as a result of the Sudanese War.
Thesis/Claim: Challenges such as, Salva's Uncle had died in the war, Salva had to cross the Nile river which were crocodile infested.
Body 1 (Challenge and survival factor 1)
Topic sentence: There have been many challenges for Salva in A Long Walk To Water.
Challenge Description: Salva is alone after Uncle's death.
Challenge Quote: " Marial was gone. Uncle was gone, too murdered by those Nuer men right before Salvas' eyes. Marial and Uncle were no longer by his side they should never be again.'' (P.G 65)
Explanation of Quote: This quote explains how Salva is alone and he has no …show more content…
Body 3 (Challenge and survival factor 3)
Topic sentence: Although Salva had to wait very a very long to get a chance to America when he was on his way to America he became very nervous.
Challenge Description: Salva started to get really nervous when he was on the plane to New York because he thought that his new family might not like him.
Challenge Quote: " What if my new family isn't here? what if they have changed their minds? What if they meet me and don't like me." ( P.G 94)
Explanation of Quote: Salva started getting nervous and scared because he thought that his new family wouldn't like him when they met.
Survival Factor: Salva soon realized that he should slow down and just see how things go and relax.
Survival Factor Quote: " Salva took a deep breath. A step at a time, he reminded himself. Just flight to get through, for now." (P.G
Introduction
Hook: Salva's everyday struggle has shown how difficult life can be. In Sudan, people had to go through some of his exact problems every day in the Sudanese civil war.
Transition Sentence(name of the book and brief background knowledge of Sudanese war and Salva): In a Long Walk to Water by Linda Sue Park, Salva experiences many challenges as a result of the Sudanese War.
Thesis/Claim: Challenges such as, Salva's Uncle had died in the war, Salva had to cross the Nile river which were crocodile infested.
Body 1 (Challenge and survival factor 1)
Topic sentence: There have been many challenges for Salva in A Long Walk To Water.
Challenge Description: Salva is alone after Uncle's death.
Challenge Quote: " Marial was gone. Uncle was gone, too murdered by those Nuer men right before Salvas' eyes. Marial and Uncle were no longer by his side they should never be again.'' (P.G 65)
Explanation of Quote: This quote explains how Salva is alone and he has no …show more content…
Body 3 (Challenge and survival factor 3)
Topic sentence: Although Salva had to wait very a very long to get a chance to America when he was on his way to America he became very nervous.
Challenge Description: Salva started to get really nervous when he was on the plane to New York because he thought that his new family might not like him.
Challenge Quote: " What if my new family isn't here? what if they have changed their minds? What if they meet me and don't like me." ( P.G 94)
Explanation of Quote: Salva started getting nervous and scared because he thought that his new family wouldn't like him when they met.
Survival Factor: Salva soon realized that he should slow down and just see how things go and relax.
Survival Factor Quote: " Salva took a deep breath. A step at a time, he reminded himself. Just flight to get through, for now." (P.G