Rollercoaster-Personal Narrative

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Long ago, in a dark cold misty cave at night, walked a girl named Sally looking for her dog Coco. She kept on walking looking for her dog because she thought he would have wandered in here then she just kept on walking a then she saw something out of the corner of her eye. Sally started to walk closer to whatever it was. Sally was close enough and the roller coaster seemed to be old, dusty and abandoned. The wood was covered in moss and it was covered in dust and dirt.
In the moist misty air, Sally saw a roller coaster cart appeared out of nowhere.
She said to herself in a confused way, “Where the heck did that come from?” Sally was so confused she didn’t know what to say about what just happened.
“I wonder what is on the other side of the rollercoaster?” Sally wondered. “I don’t know if I should go on the other side of it?”, questioned Sally.
Sally seemed
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So I walk, and I saw this rollercoaster, and then a cart appeared out of nowhere so I got in it and then I was brought here”, Jeff said.
“I was brought here by the same rollercoaster near a cave too and I was also looking for my dog Coco”, said Sally.
“I tried looking for things to help us get off the abandoned island but all I kept finding was pieces of wood”, Jeff said. Sally just sat down and thought about ideas on how to get off of the island. Sally thought and thought and thought until,”bing”, she had an idea to get off the island.
“I have an idea,” said Sally. “We can take those pieces of wood that you found Jeff, and build a roller coaster cart base with them, and then take two coconuts and break them in half for the wheels, and I have some spare nails from when I was working on my treehouse before I was in the cave and brought here”, Sally explained.
“Ok I will go gather the wood you go grab the coconuts,” Jeff informed Sally. Jeff and Sally went and grabbed the things they needed.
“Ok I got the coconuts,” Sally

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